Excellent site sincerely, Ruthann Giblin

Look cool allright…but isn’t that interesting in a weird way?...hm maybe not…who knows…
C.

I don’t understand Russian.

I remember how to read just enough Russian to suss out that it mentions porn. But it looks cool so I’m going to leave it in.
analogman

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polosaerasas

I find the theme interesting, especially in today’s apocalyptic times.  I would also like to see a tie-in to a destruction of the banking system, destruction of the Federal Reserve, and maybe some kind of poisoning or screwing-up of the Internet.  E.g. bank fraud, identity theft, people with “the pox” stealing the identities of people without the pox, etc.  Hard to verify who is real and who is one of them, etc.

Dialogue is always tough.  Some of it was good, some was less so.

I felt like the pictures had about the right amount of detail.  Rough, raw, minimal color, but still convey the point.  I am reminded of Sidney Paget’s illustrations of Sherlock Holmes.  cTanner

Like Luther, I too wonder when the next delivery of goods is due.

The pictures really give life to the text. Nice varieties of perspective and great use of color. The text isn’t bad either.
‘Tune

Glad I took the time to read it. Do you have more on the way?

Not bad. But it’s a little confusing that the first page is not the first page. At first I thought there was nothing here.

The artwork is great. Did you do it yourself?

A couple of points. More description of the people in the polis. Some things need more explanation, some need less.

It looks good!

I like that the story is more illustrative than a novel and more detailed than a comic book.

Compared to a novel, the abundance of pictures (about one per scene) allow readers to understand and visualize the story better.

And the greater detail, provided by the text, makes the plot more intriguing than a comic book.

In the field of entertainment, you’ve found and filled a niche, between comic books and novels, with an interesting story.

Ok so far but what happened before? And where does this go?

Can you hear the echo?

Dugg!!

I must say I have also enjoyed it so far.
I too am eagerly waiting the next installment of this admirable attempt to write about a post apocalyptic world, that did not come about as a result of a nuclear war/winter.And damn that 150 character limitation.  One can only just start expressing ones thoughts when…you get cut off!
The Boberam

Hurry up and write more you lazy bastard!

P.S.  Hurry up and write more you lazy bastard!